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Give my designer feedback they can act on instead of saying make it pop
A prioritised designer-feedback note with preferences labelled.
Here is the design brief [brief], current draft described or attached [draft], approved facts [facts] and my rough reactions [notes]. Sort feedback into factual corrections, brief mismatches, legibility questions and personal preferences. Rewrite it as a small prioritised set of actionable requests, each pointing to an element and desired result. Do not invent audience-test results or specify technical fixes you cannot verify. Preserve what already works and identify decisions only I can make. Ask which requirement matters most before suggesting another visual direction.
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Make it yours: Distinguish a real brief violation from your own taste.
A useful follow-up
The designer proposes a different fix for the same problem. Compare outcomes against the brief, not who suggested it.